WEEK 2 TASK 2
week 2 task 2
Emphasis , balance , the golden ratio and rules of thirds
Emphasis
attempt 2
Wilted rose losing petals
Balance
Proximity with sun and sky
symmetry for water reflection
Reflection
Exercise 2: The final outcome for emphasis is directly taken
from my suggestion, which I expected you to explore with more possibilities.
Could play around with the size of the falling petal and the overall
composition to have a better representation of emphasis. Approximate symmetry
is reflected in the other final outcome. Doing some visual research would help
give you more ideas.
Use of Media: Relevant to the exercises but finishing could
be neater, especially if ball point pen/pencil is used.
Quality of pictures: Adequate.
Descriptions/Reflection: There is more description found in
the first exercise but less in the second one. You need to label and number all
the visuals clearly so that when you describe each one, your reader knows what
you are saying. Do describe how your design works to achieve a particular
principle. Your reflection is noted but it would be good to include your
learning experience for that particular week's topic.
Lecturer's feedback: Should include all the verbal feedback
I gave during tutorial into the blog.
Overall blog: For each week's topic, you should have a
summary of that week's principles and include some visual examples related to
the topic so that your blog is more complete. For example, Week 3: Lecture
Topic, Research, Exercise, etc.